图画-写作思路框架
第一段:简要描写图片信息,避重就轻(挑会的单词、角度写)
eg.What is clearly presented in the above picture(图表用chart替换)is上图中清楚显示的是 主题
第二段:分析引申义=分析主题的利弊或原因,必要的时候举例说明。(必要=要求你举例子或者你有好的例子想展示)
第一句:Simple as it is,what the picture intends to convey to us is extremely far-reaching and thought-provoking.万能句,图片传达的信息发人深思,只要被选为考题的,那咱们就觉得它很重要很深刻,英雄所见略同。
第二句:studying it further it is ,it is not difficult for us to find that what the author wants to reflect is进一步研究它,我们不难发现作者想反映的是 引入主题,图片中最重要的关系,用名词或名词性短语来表达
重点掌握积极的、正能量精神方面的话题,那咱们第二段就写它的重要性:
①正面谈重要性:
is the importance of the spirit of
saving food/innovation/making contribution...
②负面谈严重性:
is the severity of environmental pollution/waste...
③中性只提现象,不带入情绪:
is the phenomenon of online shopping...
第三句:分析利弊
①重点掌握积极现象-分析利的两方面,eg.一方面对人的成长、健康、成功等有帮助,另一方面有助于社会的进步和谐、经济的发展、文化的繁荣,这里自己有所变化。
以奉献精神为例on the one hand,it will be beneficial to the growth and success of people. on the other hand,it will contribution to the construction of harmonious society.一方面,它将有利于人们的成长和成功。另一方面,它将有助于构建和谐社会。
②消极现象-分析弊的两方面
③两面性-分析利弊-比如互联网、技术、选择等话题
第四句-举例说明or引用名言-(非必要,凑字数)
①in order to justify the viewpoint that l have mentioned above,i can come up with no better illustration than the example of为了证明我上面提到的观点是正确的,没有比下面的例子更好的例证...
比如上面的奉献精神举例of LeiFeng ,a great warrior,who devoted his whole life to making contributions to the society.
②Just as XXX,(插入语表明身份)XXXX puts it:the spirit of making contributions is one of the traditional virtues of Chinese people,and it is our responsibility to place great emphasis on it.奉献精神是中国人的传统美德之一,我们有责任高度重视。
第三段:观点建议+呼吁或解决2-3句话
第一句:①积极问题:after what we have discussed above,we can easily come to the conclusion that effective measures should be taken to cultivate this spirit.(经过以上讨论,我们很容易得出结论,应该采取有效措施来培养这种精神。)
②消极问题:after what we have discussed above,we can easily come to the conclusion that effective measures should be taken to address this problem.(经过以上讨论,我们很容易得出结论,应该采取有效措施去解决这个问题。)
第二句:展开上一段的措施2-3句(非必要)
to begin with,it is the responsibility of the government and mass media to publicize the importance of this spirit.(社会方面,政府和媒体去宣传)in addition,we,college students,are supposed to make contributions to the society in our daily life,which is extremely essential.(我们自身要做出贡献)
第三句:only in this way,can our prospect become better and better.(只有这样,我们的前景才能越来越好。)
图表-写作思路框架
第一段:简单句简单描述,避重就轻挑会写的单词描述
what is clearly presented in the above chart is (表头翻译) .specifically speaking,___________
第二段:分析引申义=分析原因2-3条
第一句:Simple as it is,what the chart(图画用picture替换) intends to convey to us is extremely far-reaching and thought-provoking.(废话文学,万能句,表格传达的信息发人深思,考试是肩负教育意义的,只要被选为考题的,那咱们就觉得它很重要很深刻,英雄所见略同)
第二句:what triggers this phenomenon?
第三句:studying it further it is ,it is not difficult for us to come up with a considerable number of reasons to account for this phenomenon,but the most crucial ones are as follows.(进一步研究它,我们不难找出大量原因来解释这一现象,但最关键的原因如下)
第四句:to begin with,句子.in addition,句子.last but not the least,句子.
高分写法就得灵活-原因思路:
宏观环境(society/economy/culture/the government and the policy,看不同的话题分析);
微观个体individual-people,任何事物的发展离不开人的因素(能力=ability=capability/be able to do something=be capable of doing something;意识=awareness=consciousness=sense=realize=be aware of=be conscious of;观念)
举例中国农民收入增加/贫困人口减少:宏观:社会经济的发展+政府、政策支持;微观:自己有能力去学习新知识、技术+勤奋。中国人民变的富裕了。
基础差编不出来的同学,背这三句分不高的废话:
众所周知,这个现象跟社会经济的发展进步有很大的关系。此外,必须指出的是,这种情况也可以归因于社会和政策的变化。最重要的是,我们必须注意到,人们的行为和意识也会导致这一场景的发生。
to begin with,it has been universally acknowledged that this phenomenon has something to do with the development and progress of economy.in addition,it must be pointed out that this situation can also be attributed to be changes of society and policy.above all,we have to notice that the behavior and awareness of people can also lead to the happening of this scene.
热门话题举例:低碳生活low-carbon,以新能源汽车销量为例new-energy cars
to begin with,it has been universally acknowledged that with the development of society and economy,especially due to the policy of reform and opening up,Chinese people become increasingly rich.And consequently,they can afford new-energy cars which are not cheap.In addition,the government has made some policies to encourage people to buy new-energy cars.(首先,随着社会和经济的发展,特别是由于改革开放的政策,中国人民越来越富有。因此,他们可以购买不便宜的新能源汽车。此外,政府还制定了一些政策,鼓励人们购买新能源汽车。)
it must be pointed out that because new-energy cars van effectively reduce the carbon emission and people are aware of the importance of environmental protection,more and more people will choose new-energy cars.(必须指出的是,由于新能源汽车能够有效减少碳排放,而且人们意识到环境保护的重要性,越来越多的人会选择新能源汽车。)
第三段:观点建议+呼吁
①重点掌握积极现象-比如这类中国成就;脱贫-收入增加;高铁里程;文化自信、文化走向世界;国外汉语热等等;非热点话题中最重要的就是:大学生日常相关
②消极现象概率不大,如果考出来就是能解决的问题-environment pollution/the aging population老龄化/joblessness失业
③两面性:online study/online shopping
第一句1-只要没有明显的问题、坏处的还能继续:after what we have discussed above,we can easily come to the conclusion that this established trend will continue for a while in the forthcoming years.(经过以上讨论,我们很容易得出这样的结论:这种既定趋势将在未来几年持续一段时间。)
第一句2-好的事提倡鼓励:after what we have discussed above,we can easily come to the conclusion that effective measures should be taken to further encourage and support the development of new-energy cars,which is extremely essential.(经过以上讨论,我们很容易得出结论,应该采取有效措施进一步鼓励和支持新能源汽车的发展,这是非常必要的。)
第二句:only in this way,can the prospect of China become better and better.